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It's ok

Decent for a first episode, I'd first suggest you get voice actors for this instead of the on screen text, it should be easy to find some on voice actor forums on here. Better audio in general is needed here, it sounds like all the music and sounds effects were recorded somewhere else with a phone mic. aside from that I liked the art and I respect how you're trying to do an original thing.

CrowPrince responds:

Thank you a ton! Voice acting would definitely help my project out, ill definitely take a look at the voice acting forums on here! :D

I like your 3d animation style quite a bit, although I'm really not a fan of the Justin Roiland inspired humor.

Upload the full thing.

Love this but it really belongs on the art portal as a gif.

Dysfunctiona11 responds:

Ah I see, it's my first time on this website lol

Is reposting in another category not allowed?

nice animatic

finish before uploading please.

Really enjoyed this episode, it had insanley fun visuals. Loved the character designs and the backgrounds a lot. color schemes were really nice too. I see the Trigger/Gainax influence on this and it's not a bad thing at all but I will say that the sound design could use some work because the Gainax inspired fisuals paired with the FLCL soundtrack shows that the influence can be holding it back from really becoming it's own thing. I also like the main characters in this and I think this let's you get a good feel for their personalities, but another criticism I have is that voice actors don't really like they were directed, with a bit more practice I can see the actors really getting into the roles and this world feeling more alive. I gotta respect you for animating the entire thing by yourself and as your first real attempt at a cartoon as well, you've really got a lot of potential here and I hope you see it through to the fullest.

Looks nice but you should really put this on the art portal as a gif.

allofronmastiga responds:

Entirely new to newgrounds ty for the tip! <3

There's some parts of this that look good, but the majority is obviously rushed and looks unfinished. I'd be more forgiving of that if the humor wasn't lazy as well, and overall presentation is just a few notches above chinese youtube videos for toddlers.

BigTexasTony responds:

You're a lolcow 😏

JuneSSantos responds:

thanks for the 4 stars

Wandaboy responds:

i like ur cartoos

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