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Dogs Without Leashes? More like Dogs Without Balls because this cartoon is neutered compared to what it used to be. Nah but fr tho I thought this was okay, these designs look better than the dot eyes you drew on everything for a while it makes them look more like main characters. I thought the animation looked kinda lazy but it's whatever just really average, can't really blame you for making these on your own. Something I thought was really strange was that this time around Thomas isn't voicing Spusky Gus this time around, why now? I know I'm not saying too much about the cartoon itself but that's mostly because I found it boring.

I can't understand this

Bro the vibes in this are incredible!

I see potential here but I'd say the final thing falls a bit short, I think this cartoon would've benefitted being a bit longer, I'm not really sure if this is supposed to be a start to a series but it seems like it's supposed to be. That being the case I think a better way to introduce these characters and this world would be to start the episode with them in their home town receiving their mission, maybe before that we see the way they interact with each other on a regular day. Maybe the motivation could've been delivered there because I personally didn't like how the rectangle guy just flat out says the leads motivation. Speaking of him, I think he should've had a bigger part in this, I really like how the lead is the girl and her design is cool but it feels like you made the rectangle boring on purpose so it's not really a loss that he died. I think that's a bit forced. It would be way more interesting if we see him as a good leader for a decent amount of time instead of just being instantly killed off. But regardless I like the dynamic between the girl and the mammoth and it could be fun to see more of if given more time.

This is rad as fuck, good luck on the jam!

This cartoon oozes charm, I really love these how simple it is and the character interactions are really fun to watch and I look foward to seeing more from them in the future.

Tasteless and offensive.

This has a lot of charm to it, I think the video game type of dialogue is cool, it kinda reminds me of Undertale. I really like the musical aspect of this, gives it a lot of personality. One thing I kinda didn't like was that the ending felt sort of abrupt but nonetheless pretty solid.

Joe-Mega responds:

Thanks for the feedback bro! I appreciate it, I agree about the ending, I'll make sure episode 2 will flow more smoothly :)

Looks good, pretty funny, I like the short. I didn't care for the censored cursing, I thought it made sense for the show they're watching but not when it was Michael's dad. Censoring is just unnessecary since you're on the internet and can get away with anything you want. It's especially weird since their seems to be a lot of cursing in this short. I think it'd make more sense as well if it were maybe one curse word in a bigger episode or something. Still pretty good but that one aspect really bothered me.

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